the more "scholarly" essays i read, the more i dislike them. so many of them reek of overly bombastic words.
if you're so damn smart why can't you just use simple words. ie adound...uh...u can replace that with effect or contribute or use both.
just add a few more words...it won't kill ya! but it'll def make reading your damn essays more of a pleasure than a damn bloody chore.

education makes you stupid
so stupid you can't even write simple sentences.


edit: i also hate reading essays full of quotations. the quotation marks jus keep throwing me off my whole rhythm of reading the passage so there's no flow. and then at the end i'm like "wtf was that again?"